{"id":97,"date":"2021-08-10T00:55:21","date_gmt":"2021-08-10T00:55:21","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/theskywriteshere.com\/?p=97"},"modified":"2021-08-10T00:55:21","modified_gmt":"2021-08-10T00:55:21","slug":"behind-the-scenes-writing-editing-and-drafting","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/theskywriteshere.com\/index.php\/2021\/08\/10\/behind-the-scenes-writing-editing-and-drafting\/","title":{"rendered":"Behind the Scenes: Writing, Editing, and Drafting"},"content":{"rendered":"\n<p>Hello!&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Welcome to the &#8216;Behind the Scenes&#8217; of my book writing and publishing journey. Today I&#8217;m going to talk a little about the final draft read&#8230; cry, cry, cry.&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>It&#8217;s not going the way I&#8217;d hoped.&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>First of all, this is the 4th trip through this with Bri and easily the 8th draft overall. I wrote the book for NaNoWriMo in 2014. The Dream Keepers is a very well-loved story. When I decided to publish it, I printed out my last copy of the manuscript and rewrote a whole new draft into the Scrivener application. I then would export the files and import them to Google Docs and compile them for Bri. Bri and my friend Raylene read my &#8216;beta&#8217; file. I took all their comments and notes and made them on a physical draft. I then posted them to Bri&#8217;s manuscript and the Scrivener one.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Why was I making extra work for myself? I don&#8217;t know yet. We will see how Scrivener works out to determine if it is worth it or not, okay!?<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>So, Bri and I went through the copy twice more, and then we recompiled it for this final proof. Which I again made a physical copy.&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>I stress writers to do two things:&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<ol class=\"wp-block-list\"><li>Read your book out loud or have someone read it to you if you have the luxury.<\/li><li>Create a physical copy you can read to see what it looks like and make notes on that copy. I can&#8217;t tell you how different a physical copy looks compared to a digital one.<\/li><\/ol>\n\n\n\n<p>So, why am I crying?&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Because we might as well be looking at this from the beta version for all the things I see format-wise and content-wise that are wrong. It&#8217;s heartbreaking and deadline threatening since we need the final copy no later than the 16th, which probably means one more read-through, making it late.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Why, oh, why?<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>I guess this is just because Bri and I are being very thorough. We don&#8217;t want to publish rubbish. I want to put the best I can out there for people to read. I don&#8217;t want anyone to read and review my book and leave a comment saying, &#8216;this wasn&#8217;t worth the money because the grammar and punctuation were a mess.&#8217; I worked very hard on The Dream Keepers and I want it to reflect that.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>So, this time it is me reading my book like it&#8217;s the first time I&#8217;m looking at it, after reading it at least twenty times before. I have notes to droplines to a new paragraph. Notes to explain terminology that seems unusual. Notes to move apostrophes and correct tenses. And<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>notes to ask Bri why I am using tenses in some places that seem antithetical.&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>None of this includes Bri&#8217;s comments!&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Wah, wah, wah.&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>All I want to do at this point is burn it and start over.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>That said, I&#8217;m looking for ARC readers and bloggers, and bookstagrammers interested in signing up for my book tours. I will have a 100% readable product ready for release. \ud83d\ude01&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Here is the sign-up for the book tour with Enticing Journey.&nbsp;<a target=\"_blank\" href=\"https:\/\/forms.gle\/Lwidgprz8fEwzTqH8\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">https:\/\/forms.gle\/Lwidgprz8fEwzTqH8<\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Hello!&nbsp; Welcome to the &#8216;Behind the Scenes&#8217; of my book writing and publishing journey. Today I&#8217;m going to talk a little about the final draft read&#8230; cry, cry, cry.&nbsp; It&#8217;s not going the way I&#8217;d hoped.&nbsp; First of all, this is the 4th trip through this with Bri and easily the 8th draft overall. 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